It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world people travel, shift their homes, change their schools etc. These changes lead meeting of new people and hence making of new friends. When students go from school to college, they make new friends. These changes make people grow. But, I go by the statement 'old is gold' and i think that yes, it is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends. Forgetting old friends is like washing your old memories which made you happy, laugh and sometimes sad.
It is probably a chance that when you move ahead in your life you may loose connection with your friends because of different reasons like studying, business, new job etc. Loosing connection with your old friends is not like you are loosing them, just it is that you are not getting time to contact them. Every man can take out few hours from his time for his old friends once or twice in a month. In these meetings you could cherish your old times by ding fun stuff like gossiping, playing your favorite sports etc. This bonding can make a person a more affectionate towards others and make one realize that there are more important things in life than the job or any work they are doing to earn money.
Keeping in contact with your old friends can also help in ones job. people can get use of their old friend's profession to move ahead in their life. For example, if an actor is struggling in getting roles in movies or television shows and that actor has a old friend who is a director,then the director guy could help his actor friend in getting roles in his movies or television shows.
We all know that childhood was the most enjoyable part of our life and the friends with whom we enjoyed the best day of your life become part of our family. Keeping those old friends also teach us how to manage relations with the people with whom we are working. People who cut their connection with their old friends and move ahead in their life usually face this problem of keeping good relations with their business colleagues.
That is why I think that keeping your old friends is very important. Yes, people should meet new people and be friends with them. Making new friends also make a person extrovert which is a quality which helps in many phases of the life. But people should not just forget their old friends and make new friends. Every thing in life should be balanced. so people should make new friends but also not cut their connection with their old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...hen you move ahead in your life you may loose connection with your friends because of...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... with your old friends can also help in ones job. people can get use of their old fr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... old friends can also help in ones job. people can get use of their old friends profes...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... or television shows and that actor has a old friend who is a director,then the d...
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Suggestion: , then
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...Every thing in life should be balanced. so people should make new friends but also...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239085239085 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.168399168399 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0873180873181 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0540540540541 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0977130977131 0.0685040099705 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112266112266 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.04158004158 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.16386358545 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.014553014553 0.0309702414327 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.002079002079 0.00188951952338 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.0602910602911 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.022869022869 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.022869022869 0.0139019557991 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2461.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 444.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54279279279 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279279279279 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193693693694 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0945945945946 0.174417080927 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0608108108108 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16386358545 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436936936937 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.863166514 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3043478261 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7111125101 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.391304347826 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 38.6737171955 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.22727272727 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40663328369 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101178638692 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717084029406 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495041487154 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144388653868 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148940872113 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123761690011 0.0781384742642 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313158800326 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0370807438351 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26949086396 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138773260892 0.0618886996521 224% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 20.0 8.42114695341 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.