Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Without any shadow of doubt, natural resources are significant blessings that affect our daily life and human beings using surrounding natural facilities can modify their life. Our world without forests, fresh waters, and animals is not imaginable and lack of them creates substantial problems not only for humans but also for all kinds of living creatures. With this in mind each resource has its own role in the environment, as far as I am concerned, fresh water is an important elements in the world for several reasons, among which great and intensive creatures dependency to survive, help to enhancing the healthy cares among the humans, and generating a dynamic industrial economic in the country are of conspicuous ones.
To begin with, after oxygen, fresh water is key element in the nature that affects the entire surviving creatures. All creatures intensively require to the water in order to continue their life in proper manner. In addition, fresh waters play a crucial role in environment recycle and cause nurturing forests and animals through establishing precipitations. As a result, this element can be promising to the wildlife and has a vital importance in diversifying the animal and plants species all around the world. However, lack of this element in nature can lead most of creatures toward the extinction so that geological habitats change in a short-term interval and confront the humans with detriment impacts.
Undoubtedly, water opens a healthy conditions to the humans and neat their surrounding from hazardous diseases and pollution. In this regard, in most African countries, people deal with trouble diseases that have their root in lack of access to the fresh and drinking waters. In addition, humans in this unfortunate part of world encounter with increasing famine and starvation because of water shortage so that the health and care ministry in such countries supply their basic needs instead of curing their problems. Further, the United Nations cannot allot a great deal of budget to construction of water suppliers due to trouble water issues such as shortage of water sources. Therefore, the water suppliers lead societies to the healthy future and bring important challenges to the upcoming offsprings.
Last but not least, the most valuable marine animals live in the fresh waters and bring a ideal opportunities for those of countries that have great activity in fishing industry. Accordingly, in Japan the fishing industry is known as second rich and money-making industry and the authorities can achieve to the zenith of economical developing in with a wise and correct scheduling in this area. In the other words, Japanese can kill two birds with one stone: blooming the economic section of the society and modifying people's economic situation through providing diverse job opportunities, which is not accessible in the drought conditions.
All in all, with all this into account, natural resources change the living conditions of the creatures and help them to improve their lives' standards. In my opinion, the drinking water play greatest role in the world in compared to others like forest and animals, because other resources in order to being survive require to the water and cannot reach to the ideal conditions without it. Finally, it should be mentioned that now it is our responsibility to take care from our environment and strive to save all living phenomenon from extinction danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 482, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'element'?
Suggestion: element
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Line 1, column 557, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'creatures'' or 'creature's'?
Suggestion: creatures'; creature's
...easons, among which great and intensive creatures dependency to survive, help to enhancin...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...itations. As a result, this element can be promising to the wildlife and has a vital importa...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the creatures') or simply say ''most creatures''.
Suggestion: most of the creatures; most creatures
...lack of this element in nature can lead most of creatures toward the extinction so that geologica...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'opportunity'?
Suggestion: opportunity
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'play the greatest'.
Suggestion: play the greatest
...ards. In my opinion, the drinking water play greatest role in the world in compared to others...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293532338308 0.229887763892 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.101160862355 0.158761421928 64% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114427860697 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0331674958541 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0315091210614 0.0685040099705 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137645107794 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0265339966833 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78413368643 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331674958541 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.102819237148 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132669983416 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00995024875622 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3452.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 553.0 408.028673835 136% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24231464738 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399638336347 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314647377939 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216998191682 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148282097649 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78413368643 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502712477396 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 61.0960285693 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.1052631579 20.5533526081 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6845985289 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.684210526 120.699889404 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1052631579 20.5533526081 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 60.5700009517 45.7405998639 132% => OK
Elegance: 2.76 1.45489161554 190% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335133268605 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141832652047 0.103427244359 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0511315217873 0.0752933317313 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590998434528 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107306903466 0.151897553556 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154012233149 0.114077575197 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443103293169 0.0781384742642 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.460311326019 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0481887313347 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248495310793 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437921023951 0.0618886996521 71% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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