The most important quality for coworker
Adults spend most of their time on work during their lives. It is necessary to find a comfortable workplace and essentially appropriate people who are around. I believe that a good sense of humor is one of the most important qualities of a coworker for two compelling reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a laugh is our chance to make gray beasy days bright as sunshine. It is such a pleasant, enjoyable thing among the endless work routine. It helps to create an excellent mood for all colleges, therefore such features lead to increasing productivity and getting fine profit in general. For example, I was working in a landscape studio last summer. My boss was an outstandingly positive woman, just a couple of her jokes made my mood for a whole day.
My second argument relates to human well-being. It is a renowned fuct that a laugh makes a life longer.
To sum it up, I claim with confidence that the ability to make people laugh is the most important quality for every worker. This is because It makes a mood in colleges and, because it affects positively to mental and even physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69636792742 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8678128689 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291213570474 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832800501638 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13010732183 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152923641305 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121771704711 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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