The most important things for governments to do to improve health care
Viewed from a certain angle, the overall health level of citizens reflects whether the government is fully implementing its functions. A sophisticated health care system does not merely optimize social welfare that benefits the people, but also helps the authorities gain more support from the general public. Health care ensures the smooth development of a country. Regarding the specific measures to meet this goal, some people believe that cleaning up the environment is the most important. From my standpoint, it is undoubtedly an effective choice, yet other methods also deserve equal attention.
First of all, improving health care is of essential importance to a country, thus, only concentrating on one specific area is far from enough. In order to prosper the economy, every nation in the world strives to build working forces with desirable health conditions. Just as a celebrated political figure used to say: "a strong body is the prerequisite of any social course." In this respect, perfecting health care not only complies with the essential interests of people, but also helps strengthen the national power of the country.
Admittedly, cleaning the environment helps reduce the chances of health problems. According to a medical analysis, a number of human diseases are caused by water and air pollution. For example, the release of chemical, biological or radioactive contaminants into the air and water might severely threaten human life. Most of these hidden hazards are invisible to the naked eye, thus making it difficult for people to take immediate precautions. They are likely to be taken in by the human body without them noticing. Shanghai once experienced an outbreak of viral hepatitis due to people's consumption of contaminated aquatic products. In addition, long-time exposure to contaminated gas may also induce certain health problems like tuberculosis. As a result, it is imperative for the government to clean the environment by strictly eliminating any potential sources of pollutants, like industrial plants or nuclear power stations. The environment monitoring mechanism should also be well maintained so that people can be informed of air and water conditions in time.
As a matter of fact, health care improvement involves more than cleaning the environment. A sound health care system ought to be established. For instance, a stronger team of medical staff should be built. More advanced hospitals and medical organizations are also needed to meet the increasing health demand of citizens. In addition, the government is obliged to render financial support to important medical research and encourage experts to make more breakthroughs in curing fatal diseases. The quantity and quality of medical inventions should be considerably enhanced as well. Without a doubt, all these measures require tremendous financial assistance.
In summary, with the purpose of establishing a most satisfactory social health care system, unremitting efforts ought to be made by the government. Favorable impacts of a cleaner environment will get results, yet other aspects are to be functioning as well. With increased public awareness, all these essential elements can be taken into account and brought into full play.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... authorities gain more support from the general public. Health care ensures the smooth develop...
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Line 1, column 585, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
... choice, yet other methods also deserve equal attention. First of all, improving h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2761.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01423912946 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559760956175 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0197965394 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.259259259 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5925925926 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85185185185 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250706870625 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633940977492 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601625363616 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133589230994 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396813147954 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 86.8835125448 188% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.