Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbors play an important role in our welfare. They are whom we spend a lot of our life near them that could affect our decision about choosing a house. Each person believes that a good neighbor should have some features which they choose them through personal ideas, so could be different among people. In my view, a good neighbor must have two important qualities that I mention bellow.
As behavior is so important to me, being logical is the first quality for a good neighbor. Neighbors are persons who live around you even closer than your families, whom you see every day and connected to them through different problems that can be either personal or occur in vicinity. So, it is much easier for you to face logical person for solving these problems. For example, I just moved to my new place, spending a hard emotional time because I didn't know any one. Every day, I noticed some trash in front of my apartment door which either smelled awful and created a bad scene. I tried to find the reason and finally noticed that when my neighbor put his trash out, throw some of them in front of my door. As, I didn't know him, I had a lot of stress because it was vague to me, what I was going to face and did he accept his fault and situation got better or everything was going to get worse. eventually, I decided to talk him. When I explained my problem, he behaved very logically and it turned out that it happened accidentally. He apologized me a lot and invited me for drinking coffee. Now, we spend a lot of time with each other and become our best friends. As you can clearly see, good neighbor is logical one.
Second, it is important to be neighbor with small family. Big families had more children, which means more noise that can bother you if you don't use to it. For instance, my friend Monica always was sleepy during class. One day, I asked her about the reason, and she started to talk about her neighbor that has 10 children. She said, they were in different ages that caused facing different problems. Youngers used to set up party every night that played loud music and it was continued until morning. Others that were in their teens always were fighting and running in the home that made my roof shaking. She stated that it was the good part of the story because they had a new-born baby who cried all the time. This experience taught me that big families bring big problems, so size of family is an important factor.
In conclusion, every person has his own idea about the quality of a good neighbor. In my view, not only is being logical an important quality, but also the size of the family is essential. I think people should try to be a good neighbor as expect it from theirs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47283702213 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30293974091 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523138832998 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3753638035 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3928571429 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17789090346 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498330361991 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057922127975 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120993221804 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331385574601 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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