People attend college or university for many various reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans are complex beings, as such, their actions and inactions can be very difficult to predict. The reason why an individual decides to eschew an action may be the same reason why another individual embraces it. The reasons why people undergo post high-school education are diverse. However, I think the reason why people go to universities and colleges for further education can be broadly divided into two because of a fundamental reason: that is, their financial security and environment.
An impecunious person from Africa, for example, wouldn't attend university/college to meet new people or to acquire more knowledge in the real sense of it. Such a person would be more interested in developing some basic skills and getting a degree that would allow him/her to be more employable, and subsequently fare better in the harsh environment he had grown up. In other words, the motive of that man from Africa to further his education to college level would, most probably, be career preparation.
On the other hand, a financially stable young man from Europe who is more interested in what makes him feel fulfilled/happy may decide to get a college degree in order to gain more knowledge, meet more like minds or any other reason that has little to do with career preparation. In conclusion, though it is difficult to pinpoint reasons for people's decisions, I believe the financial status and environment of individuals decide the reasons why they go to colleges and universities for further education. The reason can either be career preparation or fulfilment.
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community Do you support or oppose the factory Explain your position 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 71
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- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning fo 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...unious person from Africa, for example, wouldnt attend university/college to meet new p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12109375 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98574238553 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3051946105 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295479025505 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130490463162 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991871740099 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20400836277 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446526628477 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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