No doubt, I advocate this way which that people learn by listening to people talk about things. Why I advocate this way I would in here explain for numerous reasons which are as follows; it gives me the best knowledge, experience and moral.
First of all, talking to ingenious people, I can acquire very important knowledge from there. I do not deny another way but this way seems to me the best because I prefer to talk to wiser person instead of read a great amount of books. However, in my opinion reading many books has efficiency but listening to people talk about things has faster than others. On the other hand, learning things and training by teacher this is the best for me.
Another reason is that, the best way learning things is listening to experienced people and talk about things. I had some problems and I had to solve it then I did not know what I am doing. Although, I read and studied a great amount of things I did not solve that problem. In the end, I talk to experienced person and also who taught me what I should do. As a result, I could get rid of problem but also if I have problems and have to solve immediately, of course now I know what way is the best.
Third reason is that, learning things of important part is moral. I seem more objectively and so interesting to me listening moral of experienced people and someone with high knowledge whose are talking to each other. I have already realized to what is bad or good and which is efficiency or damage. In additionally, it has advantage I can become independent person and I will become respect elder, because listening to elder carefully is best character and they will always valuable moral to descendant.
In conclusion, let you know why I all of above ideas are supportive;moreover, I looked at these ideas how to solve them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'me the best'.
Suggestion: me the best
... reasons which are as follows; it gives me best knowledge, experience and moral. First...
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Line 4, column 437, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...r, because listening to elder carefully is best character and they will always valuable...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; these ideas
...s are supportive. Moreover, I looked at these idea how to solve them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, third, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, you know, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51070336391 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57464750422 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507645259939 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0928568625 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7058823529 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310346550172 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104660785228 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136567603788 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169900371754 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091173402707 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.