I think that machines better than to doing work by hand. Machines can work faster, efficiency, and can work more a longer. I would in here explain for three reasons in below.
First of all, in my opinion machines can work faster than me. If i were a builder and if i have to transfer lots of buildings stuff, i would transfer them slowly. It takes too much time. If i use machines, it is no longer and save a large amount of time.
The second reason is that machines are going to have efficiency. However, it concerns what we making, machines can give us a lot of advantage. If i were sower and if i have to harvest grain immediately, machines will be can efficiency, faster and work better than myself. Therefore, i prefer using machines.
Third reason for using machines are not tired any works. There is no difference work in the middle of night or in the morning. As a result, if i work at night, i get tired but machines are which does not care about at all. It is going to concern on me when we working.
In conclusion, all of above my reasons why i think about.
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...conclusion, all of above my reasons why i think about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30541871921 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45920882093 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6930373537 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.625 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6875 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169537012027 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669121005888 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840809028639 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091391689966 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359208587148 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 11.7677419355 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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