Person should be honest.
Almost everyone agrees that childhood is the most critical period in human's life. It's the period that lays the foundation of child's future. I strongly believe that honest is the most precious feature that kids should always behave. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will develop in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, honesty is an efficacious way for the most successful life(to excel in your work). In fact, i have experienced an episode in my life that can relate to what I mean. two years ago, I started working as a pharmacy technician at Walgreens. I was extremely punctual which means that I always came on time and never be late. I always honest and follow rules and regulations. Because of my Honesty, I got promoted in my job and became a senior technician, consequently, my salary is duplicated. Based on my experience, practicing honesty helped me to excel in my career and obtained a high wage.
Secondly, Practicing honesty makes you a trustworthy person, on the other hand, being dishonest makes others untrusted you bevause one lie can easily lead to a hundred more lies. My sister's experience is compelling evidence for what I mean. My sister Marina is in an engineering school. She had a final project in each semester and she had to do this assignment by her self. she decided secretly secretively to hire someone to complete (perform)j the project for her. Her professor knew what she did, as a result, she failed in this project and had to redo the project again,moreover, her professor never trusted her anymore. If she had been honest and work diligently, she would have passed the project and have succeeded in her studies.
It can be summed up in accentuating that being honest helps you to get promoted in your career because of your great reputation. Also, practicing honest makes others trusted you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...he most critical period in humans life. Its the period that lays the foundation of ...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Two
...my life that can relate to what I mean. two years ago, I started working as a pharm...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... had to do this assignment by her self. she decided secretly secretively to hire so...
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Line 7, column 574, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , moreover
...roject and had to redo the project again,moreover, her professor never trusted her anymor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, i mean, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8643533123 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76370221547 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.965386793 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167816864331 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442745033565 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067067733975 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107790980847 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665775887825 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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