Pets should be treated like family members
Pets are similar to humans, they can feel sad,happy,angry,and the most importantly they need love, they need attention. So, I agree that pets should be treated like family members. Below are a few reasons in support of my view.
To start with, when we adopt a pet from a shelter or we buy them from the store at that moment we also have responsibility to provide their live like a human being needs a food, medicine and love. Often parents adopt a pets to teach their children about resnponsibility. By feeding,walking,and grooming a dog, kids learn to be dependable and kind.
Next, Pets also can play a role as sincere friend. Many people live alone these days. So they need a partner to overcome their loneliness. For example, when I was a kid, I didn’t have a lot of friends because my mother alwasys disallow me to play with other kids at my neighborhood and i felt lonely. Then one day my mother bought me a couple of fishes and asked me to take care of them. I was really happy because I felt like I had a little brothers and my father taught me how to feed them and cleaned an aquarium. And that is really affect my whole life, I became more resnponsible and happier.
Last but not least, many studies show that pets also can help a people with special needs and the elderly. In addition to the usual services that pets may provide, such as bringing thing to their owners or helping a vision–impared owner to avoid some obstacle. and for elderly, dogs or cat often help them with barking or meowing to protect their masters or even asking for help when their owners in trouble. Often elderly treated pets like their kids so they didnt feel lonely for the rest of their life.
In conclusion, pets just like a kids in our family. for those who treats their pets right they will get reciprocation from theirs pets through their kindness and loyalty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56379821958 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68537632868 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0764201829 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9473684211 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230020365908 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825302984152 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136389543272 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149845801287 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844097436957 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.