Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word Count: 379
It is critically important that people have a satisfactory lives, which make them happy and causes to have good feeling about themselves. Personally, I believe todays,people experiencing happiest era during the whole history. I feel this way for two main reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, talking about past people's attitudes about life is doubtful because we do not know about their real feeling, so it is hard to me to belive they were more happier than us. By looking to history, we will find out during all the epchs people were unsatisfaction, and they were in struggle with themselves by objection about life and protest to their governments and fighting with each other. In small case, takes an individaual life as an example. From childhood to adulthood, people have always something to be upset about, so they never experience trure happines from buttom of their heart. My personal experience in acompelling illustration of this. I was unhappy all over my life, it did not matter what my problem was. If i consider my life, I will say I was the reaason of my upsetness. Human being are seeking problems unintentionaly to make them unsatisfied.
Furthermore, todays life is more easier than before, and provides people with a lot of facilities with make them happy and causes various sorts of satisfiction. During past, people had to do physical work more than today because their subsidence needs to be reached. they were also suffering from lots of disease, which was causing their children and own death. But in this modern era, by explosion of technology, people do not have to work hard physically, and die by disease are vary low which make the people to have along happy life more than every era. For instance. My grandmother, who is alive, always talks about the difficulties that they had to tolerate to just have a bath or make a food.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that todays life is far more happier and satisfaction for the people than the past. This is because we are not knoe about past's people attitute to life to state how happy they were, and by todays modern life and plenty of facilities life is more pleasable than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...portant that people have a satisfactory lives, which make them happy and causes to ha...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...themselves. Personally, I believe todays,people experiencing happiest era during the wh...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'experiencing the happiest'.
Suggestion: experiencing the happiest
...es. Personally, I believe todays,people experiencing happiest era during the whole history. I feel th...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... essay. To begin with, talking about past peoples attitudes about life is dou...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...so it is hard to me to belive they were more happier than us. By looking to history, we will...
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Line 3, column 741, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... did not matter what my problem was. If i consider my life, I will say I was the ...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...tisfied. Furthermore, todays life is more easier than before, and provides people with a...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e their subsidence needs to be reached. they were also suffering from lots of diseas...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...hard physically, and die by disease are vary low which make the people to have along...
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Line 5, column 693, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...to tolerate to just have a bath or make a food. In conclusion, I am of the opinion...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...In conclusion, I am of the opinion that todays life is far more happier and satisfacti...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... of the opinion that todays life is far more happier and satisfaction for the people than th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80263157895 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70095268921 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1539817521 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.388888889 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208828812267 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661162291546 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628828698028 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137577006124 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336914626898 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.