Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Research is an important activity for all the scientists. Lots of people get benefit from it, such as professors, and students. To improve the society it is a necessity. However, there is an argument that states using printed material is better than using internet to do a research. In my view, instead of using internet instead of printed material is better for two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
The first reason to be mention is it is more easier. If you use internet to do a research, you can reach the required information from your phone or laptop at any time. It has a wide network where you can get all the information. For example, when I was doing my senior project, I did not have to stuck in the library to get the information. I could be able to reach all of the details from my home. It was a huge convenience for me. Thus, I believe using internet is more easier to do a research.
Furthermore, the second reason is it will decrease the number of trees which have been cut to produce printed materials. To prepare the books and articles we destroy thousand of trees. For instance, I remember from my social science course at high school, to produce tons of paper, seventeen trees are cut. This can also cause a damage to environment and ecological balance. Thus, if we use internet to do a research we can decrease the number of trees that have been cut and save the environment.
In conclusion, I would like to state using internet to do a research is better way than using printed materials, it is more easier and it will prevent cutting trees. Hence, I believe using internet is more beneficial rather than using printed materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ial is better than using internet to do a research. In my view, instead of using internet ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...The first reason to be mention is it is more easier. If you use internet to do a research, ...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e information. I could be able to reach all of the details from my home. It was a huge con...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...r me. Thus, I believe using internet is more easier to do a research. Furthermore, the s...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...eve using internet is more easier to do a research. Furthermore, the second reason is i...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of trees which have been cut to produce printed materials. To prepare the books ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...epare the books and articles we destroy thousand of trees. For instance, I remember from...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...teen trees are cut. This can also cause a damage to environment and ecological balance. ...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ould like to state using internet to do a research is better way than using printed materi...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...way than using printed materials, it is more easier and it will prevent cutting trees. Henc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58803986711 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63551699368 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0062321475 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6842105263 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395959358128 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119179127014 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134337133011 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260222289385 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10007213619 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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