satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
It is entirely dependent on a person's mindset whether he wants to make a large amount of money or be satisfied with what he/she has. Some people are never satisfied with their hard work or effort while some do not want to take to much of burden and stress. Every viewpoint has its own advantages and disadvantages but according to me people should work hard and they should work up till they have the capability to do so.
First of all, working hard and never be satisfied with what you have achieved will only motivate a person and encourage them to achieve more. This does not mean that people should never accept their failure instead they should learn and rectify the mistakes they had done. Drawing from my experience, I was disconsolate due to my failure in competitive exam but my mother taught me that one should never feel bad and stop working hard thinking that they will never succeed. A person should always find ways where he can improve and hence should never settle with what he has earned in life.
Furthermore, trying hard and will to always improve should never mean that a person can never celebrate his/her accomplishment. Each and every person should make themselves realize their worth and this will, in turn, help them be motivated and work efficiently.
We have always seen that many Hollywood actors or other celebrities work even after they have taken retirement, by engaging in various activity such as sports or health awareness campaigns. This only means that a person should find ways where can multiply his/her money as the world has become soo competitive that it does not allow any one to settle or be satisfied with what they have.
In short, I feel that people who feel satisfied with what they have will eventually slow down their progress and will limit their potential. In my opinion, this outcome can never be beneficial to anyone .
- satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 3
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their family for a longer time. Which of these solutions do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
- Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for 76
- “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion. 76
- You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
It is entirely dependent on a persons mindset whether he wants to make a larg...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...r effort while some do not want to take to much of burden and stress. Every viewpo...
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Line 11, column 334, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... soo competitive that it does not allow any one to settle or be satisfied with what the...
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Line 15, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...utcome can never be beneficial to anyone .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, i feel, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80923076923 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41686647428 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0648659531 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0442590810136 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199939657984 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183968951732 0.0737576698707 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0287832267424 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164926575129 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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