Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
There is no shortage of debate about what is best for a university student: attend classes or study remotely. Without no question, many would think that is essential for students to attend every class; others may consider the opposite point of view. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the idea that going to classes should be a student election to do. I feel this way for two main reasons that I am going to explore in the following essay.
First of all, study online is an excellent option to save time and manage their time better. In this fashion, is important to understand that university students usually attend many courses at the same time. In other words, the amount of assignments, volume of texts and books they need to read and study demand them a big amount of time and good organization skills. Consequently, attending classes remotely could be a good solution to save time. My own experience is a compelling example of this point. During my first year in the university I have 5 courses and a job, so the only way I could complete all the courses was doing some online; I could listen to them during the hours I considered the best.
Secondly, considering that not all the students live in-campus, classes online are a good solution to save money to the students and professors while they do not need to expend in transportation. To illustrate this idea let's consider the following example. Again, when I was a student I use to live in my friend apartment in downtown. The location was excellent because it was near of my job, but a little far away from the university. As a result every time I had to attend classes was costly for me. Moreover, having a couple of online classes help me to save enough to continuous studying, even though my salary was not very high.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that university students should decide if they have to attend classes or not, because they could improve their time management and save money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
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... apartment in downtown. The location was excellent because it was near of my job,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65155807365 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62552900636 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507082152975 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4891903202 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229407835356 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078389738831 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698724970916 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157578089262 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880562280676 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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