Some people prefer to enjoy their money when they earn it, while others prefer to save their money for some specific time in the future. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each lifestyle?
Many people nowadays decide to spend their money as soon as they collect it instead of saving it. This act has both negative and positive consequences.
To begin with, one of the common benefits of saving money is financial security. Saving money is difficult, but people who set goals and have a clear vision of how they would like to spend their savings are more likely to succeed. Moreover, people who save money for specific reasons have more possibilities of choosing where they live and buy a house of their dreams if they save. Also, saving can make people's lives easier and avoid getting caught in financial emergencies. Furthermore, the value of saving is to accumulate cash reserves so people can take calculated risks with more freedom. If people do not have enough savings, it is harder to pursue certain passions. For instance, people who want to start as a small business must have some financial back up to get off the ground. People with savings are more open to experiencing new opportunities even if it means temporarily impacting their savings.
On the other hand, people believe that there are no potential consequences of not saving money, but there are. People who do not have savings accounts rely on their credit cards when they are in financial trouble, and they might end up going into debt. As a consequence, debt causes people to be under stress every day and make it impossible to concentrate, but in the worst-case scenario, they might not be able to sleep at night worrying about their financial situation. Therefore, people whose stress levels increase might lead to serious physical health problems such as a high risk of heart attack, depression, headache, etc. Additionally, when people do not have savings, there are many situations that they miss out on. For instance, people cannot afford to go on little adventures because of the lack of savings nor visit their family for the holidays who live far away from them.
All in all, saving money is a good idea for future purposes, whereas spending the money once earned will never be. Finally, people should think about the advantages and disadvantages of their actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93698630137 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58088299378 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583561643836 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1053202598 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341210731393 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112519349072 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681469381523 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220694784633 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375983953967 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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