Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Life is full of enjoyment and grief, and we spend it with the people who are important to us. Each person has a different preference about spending his time. Some people prefer to spend it alone because they enjoy solitude [more]. However, it would be hard for me imagine my life without friends. I do not lose any opportunity to spend time with my friends because they are good motivators, they are good advisers, and they make my life full of fun and joy.
To begin with, friends provide us incentives for our progress. They always inspire us to achieve our goals and congratulate us on our victories. For example, when I passed the board entrance test, my friends cheered me on in such a way that I was motivated to pursue my dream to be a doctor more intensely. Furthermore, friends are always with us to share our grief and sorrow. When we lose something or cannot achieve our goals, they are always with us to sympathize with us. They also help us to find solutions to our problems. If I decide to spend my time alone, I can not inspire myself or resolve my problems in isolation.
In addition, friends always broaden our knowledge about different fields. When I meet my friends, I get information about newly released movies, books and novels. In addition, we often talk about political issues, which helps me to know about their views. We also discuss topics related to our study materials that we find difficult, and this way we can understand the topics clearly and quickly. If I would spend my time reading books and watching news on TV alone, I will get bored very easily, and can not learn more.
Last but not least, when I am with my friends, I always feel happy. We all play football, bascketball and we all are skateing together. This makes my muscles strong, and my mind fresh. On the other hand, spending time in loneliness does not help me to refresh my mind. Moreover, I often go with my friends to a movie, we often go to clubs for a party, and we also take a trips together, which makes my life interesting.
To sum it up, some people prefer to spend their time alone. However, I always choose to be with friends because they motivate me, help me to solve my problems, and make my life full of happiness and entertainment.
- Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer. 76
- Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...ith us to sympathize with us. They also help us to find solutions to our problems. If I decide ...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...clearly and quickly. If I would spend my time reading books and watching news on ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.184549356223 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.171673819742 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0472103004292 0.0866891130778 54% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0729613733906 0.046263068375 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.167381974249 0.0685040099705 244% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0815450643777 0.118717715034 69% => OK
Participles: 0.019313304721 0.0351676179071 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50586466094 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0450643776824 0.0309702414327 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00214592274678 0.00188951952338 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.0386266094421 0.0887237588012 44% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150214592275 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150214592275 0.0139019557991 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2257.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 408.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5318627451 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294117647059 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21568627451 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132352941176 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.093137254902 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50586466094 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 52.9284562706 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3022662162 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0416666667 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 38.568627451 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 0.692708333333 1.45489161554 48% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336104606098 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0900524600259 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0787850317086 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485976171868 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135623134686 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129105728515 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994946047385 0.0781384742642 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304303691099 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0244568022583 0.067059652881 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245798234532 0.210909579961 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103557425758 0.0618886996521 167% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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