Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time.
Time is a limited resource that no one can control or change. Because of this fact, we should decide how to efficiently invest our temporal supply. Sometimes, considering the dynamism that modern society is providing us with, our mental and physical health need a little alleviation. Personally, i prefer to spend my free time alone. Why?
Firstly, alone you can do whatever i want. For example, your inner ego want to watch an old black and white movie. Not all human beings understand the beauty of an analog produced film. With a group of friends, all members should select an objective desire. Because of my specificity, the mainstream will not agree with my particularity. Additionally, the choice will be mine, and i will not depend on others considerations.
Futhermore, solitude allows you to reboot your brain and unwind.Constantly being "on" doesn't give your brain a chance to rest and replenish itself. Being by yourself with no distractions gives you the chance to clear your mind, focus, and think more clearly. It's an opportunity to revitalize your mind and body at the same time. Moreover, solitude helps you work through problems more effectively, giving you time to think of effective solutions to problems when you're distracted by incoming information, regardless of whether that information is electronic or analog.
Because of people, all your ideas and motivations will fade away. I'm not saying that humans are either good or bad, i'm trying to relevate the benefits of an productive life. Of course, all we humans, need to socialize, this is our nature. But, a little abstention will improve our quality of living an frutiful and beautiful life.
- Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer. 76
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204968944099 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.152173913043 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0807453416149 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0590062111801 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0745341614907 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0869565217391 0.118717715034 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0341614906832 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95167468924 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0341614906832 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.083850931677 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027950310559 0.0209618222197 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1695.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 275.0 408.028673835 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16363636364 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378181818182 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265454545455 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192727272727 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123636363636 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95167468924 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.524397521467 122% => OK
Word variations: 73.462786438 59.2087087015 124% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4736842105 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3619204153 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.019138756 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.14130434783 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318561504724 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0763972401647 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0666170492306 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.434669102273 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123386448528 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101381610432 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654154495161 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.169481926842 0.336927656856 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0305455257438 0.067059652881 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197422062281 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214302913765 0.0618886996521 35% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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