Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the recent two decades, computers have became an important part of lives. today, we use computers to doing a large number of our tasks. In this regard, there is a controversy among people about that the computers make our lives comfort or not. Some people hold the view that these devices have made our lives more complex and stressful. However, others hold exactly the opposite point of view. As far as I'm concerned, I believe that today we have easier life using computers. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two conspicuous reason in support of my claim.
First and the foremost, people can do a large number of their task without going out of home just by using their computers. today, most of social affairs can be done by taking advantage of computers. For example, recently I wanted to pay my tax bill. I figured out that there is a website in which I can pay my bills, particularly my tax bill. I entered the above mentioned webside, and I payed my bill. also I had a opportunity to view my older bills as well.
Another significant reason is that we can access to a large amount of news using computers as soon as possible. there are considerable number of sites over the Internet in which they provide recent news to their viewers. we can also use computers in order to check the forecast every time we want. For instance, my father wanted to go on a road trip last month. He needed to check the forecast for his road trip. I used my computer to check the information that my father wanted to know ,and less than a minute I gave him the forecast information using my computer.
To sum up. I believe that computers have a numerous abilities to makr our lives more and more easire. Maybe checking the news onlie and paying our bills are a littile part of computers' abilities. By upbringing our knowledge about computers and taking advantage of computers, our lives become easer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... the recent two decades, computers have became an important part of lives. today, we u...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Today
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lives. today, we use computers to doing a large number of our tasks. In this regard, there is a c...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y the opposite point of view. As far as Im concerned, I believe that today we have...
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Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... First and the foremost, people can do a large number of their task without going out of home ju...
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Suggestion: Today
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...mentioned webside, and I payed my bill. also I had a opportunity to view my older bi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: There
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nformation that my father wanted to know ,and less than a minute I gave him the fo...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ability'?
Suggestion: ability
... believe that computers have a numerous abilities to makr our lives more and more easire....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5701754386 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53429842627 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2378939451 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9565217391 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8695652174 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207705782193 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595756579242 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736759331818 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13316062526 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105480941803 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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