Some people say that internet provides lot of information. Others say that access to too much information leads to problem.
Internet act as a key for information. Some folks believe that there are a lot of valuable information and some folks think
that lot of information makes more problems. I always believe that internet always give plenty of precious infos with out
any issues and these will be the focus of my essay.
First of all, internet provides all the data around the world that ease our lives. For example, when I did my
research it was so easy to do with the internet. If I give the key words then the rest will be done by the machine in a
fraction of second. If this facility is not there I have to take the relevent books and check the index and find the
part and one more problem is if some developments happened recently I won't get that info. However, internet provides
all the relevant information and this will be up to date . Therefor, internet supplies all the important details
a person wants which in turn help in their day today lives.
Secondly, internet information helps to save money. For instance, early days we brought dress from the shop and
usually they cost high and it was hard to find the price of the same brand shirt in other city. Now things are changed
there are a lot of sites so that we can order the cloths from my home itself, We can check the price at different
shops and buy the same brand clothes cheaper. This help us to save money and we can also save lot of time. As a result
this information from the internet helps to live better.
Lastly, information from the internet helps to build a creative society. I bought a house and planned to do the
flooring by myself. I asked about how to do he floor in the net and there is lot of video presentation about it which
are highly professional. So if the people have any doubts about any thing they can go and find the solution. This helps
the people to think about doing themselves.
In conclusion, internet have plenty of valuable infos will helps ease their daily lives, will helps to live better
and helps to make more creative. We cannot imagine a world without internet.
- Parents today are more involved in their children education there before 61
- Do you agree or disagree? Playing computer games is a waste of time.children should not be allowed to play them. 63
- Do you agree or disagree the following? Television advertising directed towards young children (2-5 years old) should not be allowed. 60
- Some people say that internet provides lot of information. Others say that access to too much information leads to problem. 65
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people in the past 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'acts'.
Suggestion: acts
Internet act as a key for information. Some folks be...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...et always give plenty of precious infos with out any issues and these will be the focus...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...these will be the focus of my essay. First of all, internet provides all the ...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...se our lives. For example, when I did my research it was so easy to do with the i...
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Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it was so easy to do with the internet. If I give the key words then the rest will...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
... to do with the internet. If I give the key words then the rest will be done by the machi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he rest will be done by the machine in a fraction of second. If this facility is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...et that info. However, internet provides all the relevant information and this wi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... information and this will be up to date . Therefor, internet supplies all the imp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernet supplies all the important details a person wants which in turn help in the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... turn help in their day today lives. Secondly, internet information helps to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... days we brought dress from the shop and usually they cost high and it was hard ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t dress from the shop and usually they cost high and it was hard to find the pr...
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...rt in other city. Now things are changed there are a lot of sites so that we can ...
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Line 15, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...money and we can also save lot of time. As a result this information from the int...
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Line 18, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m the internet helps to live better. Lastly, information from the internet he...
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.... I bought a house and planned to do the flooring by myself. I asked about how to...
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Line 19, column 48, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'floors'.
Suggestion: floors
...g by myself. I asked about how to do he floor in the net and there is lot of video pr...
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Line 20, column 65, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... So if the people have any doubts about any thing they can go and find the solution. This...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple to think about doing themselves. In conclusion, internet have plenty of v...
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Line 23, column 64, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...rnet have plenty of valuable infos will helps ease their daily lives, will helps to l...
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Line 23, column 99, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...will helps ease their daily lives, will helps to live better and helps to make more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52116402116 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35502279642 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494708994709 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0902496407 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.380952381 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179006995488 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059560244001 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474595484118 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569929577873 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513389568928 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.