You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks which country would you like to visit?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... in the seven wonder of the world. Being an history student I study the history o...
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...n the seven wonder of the world. Being an history student I study the history of ...
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Suggestion: as well
...d this visit will help me in my studies also. There are lots of ancient temples whic...
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Suggestion: These
...ot of sculptures engraved in the stone. This monuments are a real wonder because it ...
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...a country which was invaded by different countries so we can see lot of foreign a...
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... India which is also popular to see. India is place of culture and diversitie...
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Suggestion: many
...this is the only place we can find this much languages and religion under one umbrel...
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...ere culture and thereby we can know more about that country and people. There are...
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...hat we can adopt from their culture. Finally, India is a place which were we ...
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...ecause of the financial constraints. In conclusion, visiting India has lots o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49049429658 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46088397121 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51711026616 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0031396355 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4705882353 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139167400194 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414615709379 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511030110816 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822146008232 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364791646603 0.0645574589148 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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