Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are living in a modern society with the invention of the internet, which provides us with numerous ways to access a plenty of valuable information. However, people think about this phenomenon and question whether the internet helps people to find good information or it just generates so many problems. In my opinion there are always two sides in every story. But, the advantages of having the internet outweigh its disadvantages. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it benefits people in education. In the past, when students had to do research or papers, they had to go to libraries and spent amount of time day and night there to find the books that were relevant to their topics. It took them so much time to complete a paper of a project. However, today, what students need to do is to open their computer and type some keywords about the author of even if they do not remember the name of the writers they are also able to find a good deal of information on the internet. They can save a lot of time. Moreover, there are many web sites, which are written on the internet, so students can enrich their knowledge easily and effectively.
Secondly, the internet benefits marketing issue. It is no doubt that today most people use the web page. This is really a pivotal key for the businesses, who would like to investigate the marketing. Besides the evaluation the interest of their customers in their real lives, they can post their notions on the internet from there they can receive various comments of people. As a result, the businesses can measure and know what kinds of products that will be suitable for their users.
Last but not least, the internet provides people who are interested in news with a tremendous and convenient way. Compared to the past, when people would like to read news about their locals or their countries, they had to order newspapers or magazines and the news were only in a day. Today, people do not need to pay money for that. They just need to open their smart phone or computer, they can read as much as they want, and the news cover many events on the whole world. People can also see and compare what happen from different perspectives, because there are many people with innumerable ideas are presented on the internet.
In conclusion, people have their own ideas about the internet. In my point of view, the internet is a golden key to open the world of the data. It brings us many benefits and provides us with a lot of valuable information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62995594714 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50138039478 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480176211454 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6275737533 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5833333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95833333333 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246980469261 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746096759298 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676661120528 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155923692321 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722084194444 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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