Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with?Give reasons for your choice.
Parenting is often regarded as a demanding job. Some people believe that parents should plan their children’s leisure time whereas, on the other hand, some feel children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time. This essay will discuss the gravity of providing children the freedom to make decisions rather than enforcing parent’s choices on them
First, a child’s personality includes many aspects including the capability of making decisions and managing time. If children learn to manage their time and make informed decisions at an early age would bolster their performance in the long run. For instance, a family in my neighborhood had strict parents who would plan their children every hour of the day. The child after a certain age has difficulty making choices and often tends to follow the crowd rather than contemplating circumstances himself. Thus, I believe giving children some flexibility would help shape their personality significantly
Second, children know best what will they enjoy most in their leisure time and how they would like to spend it because every child is different and would enjoy disparate activities. Some would enjoy indoor games, some cherish outdoor games. For example, if parents force an indoor games lover to play football then they will not be able to appreciate the leisure time. Hence, it is cardinal for the children to plan their leisure time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 227.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25110132159 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58363941176 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590308370044 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.933128475 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438674506205 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184181406334 0.076458572812 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187144978835 0.0737576698707 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325510826835 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136453588873 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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