Painting
While the passage provides evidence that the painting 'Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet' was not Rembrandt's creation the lecture expresses a different point of view
First, the passage highlights the inconsistency regarding the way woman is dressed in the portrait and hence, states that the painting is not made by Rembrandt. This is evident from the example the linen hat worn by the woman is of the kind only worn by servants and the coat with a fur collar poses a luxurious look. On the contrary, the lecture claims that that fur collar in the coat was not part of the original painting. Instead, was added on top after 100 years the painting was made. Supposedly, to increase the value of the painting
Second, the passage states that the light and shadow work of the painting is poor. This is supported by the statement that the fur collar worn by the woman should absorb the light. However, the face of the woman is illuminated. Such mistakes were not expected from Rembrandt. On the other hand, the lecture reveals that due to the later imposition of fur collar, the light is not in sync with the clothes claiming that Rembrandt had not created the painting
Lastly, the passage asserts that on examining the back of the painting it was found that the panel was made up of several pieces of wood glued together and Rembrandt often did not use such glued panels. The lecture states that the glued wood panels were result of addition of fur collar proving that the painting was not made by Rembrandt
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While the passage provides evidence that the ...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture expresses a different point of view First, the passage highlights the incons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, so, while, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35668412991 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458646616541 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.049988642 49.2860985944 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.6 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28625415427 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124613390889 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137428316289 0.0662205650399 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196994497138 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273841743283 0.0443174109184 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.