Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer?
Although many people prefer traveling with a partner, I personally believe that traveling solo is more enjoyable than with a companion. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, when I travel alone, I have more freedom in what to do and where to go. I can do everything at my own pace and style, and my plans would be much more flexible when I am alone. For instance, last year my friend and I traveled to France. We decided to visit a famous museum on the last day of the trip, and I was very excited about it. Unfortunately, my friend got sick that day. I had to cancel our plan because she did not feel well, and I did not want to leave her alone in the hotel room. However, I was despondent that we did not have a chance to visit that museum. If I had traveled alone, I would have gone to that place without any limitation and worry.
Secondly, a companion could cause distractions. Every time I travel with my friends, we get so busy talking to each other that we miss many details about the place we visit. I traveled to Brazil a couple of years ago, and one of my friends was with me on the trip. She was looking forward to seeing the amazon forest and could not stop talking about it during the flight. At the end of the flight, I realized that all I did was listening to her instead of looking through the window and see the beauty of the forest and river from the height. I would not have missed this chance If I had been alone.
In conclusion, I think that traveling alone has more advantages than traveling with someone else. This is because I have more freedom during the trip, and there would not be any distractions for me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'listen'
Suggestion: listen
...e flight, I realized that all I did was listening to her instead of looking through the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25617283951 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3547643254 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515432098765 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7435128157 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6111111111 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232488754572 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697863518342 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982450583364 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164634633772 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09321831007 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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