The Strong Force
Originality or authenticity are relative topics that depend on what do you want to talk
about. The exact definition of originality is the ability to think independently and
creatively. That means that two people could talk about love in two totally different
contexts and still being original stories because they have different content. So to clarify
and resume when you are talking about two stories’ general topic and in both cases is
love, that is not original, because is not someone’s idea, is a reason of life every human
feels about something even once in life. But if such as my love story is about a boy
that has just four years to live and another story in comparison of mine is also
about love but that talks about old school love, then, in that case, we are both original
because my story is from my creativity like hers too. Willa Cather wrote a quote that talks
about the absence of originality but also about how people do not get bored. To
understand a little better we must compare the quote with the strong force to understand
why people never get bored with the same themes in movies, books or even in songs. A
great introduction!
The quote Willa Cather wrote is “There are only two or three human stories, and they
go on repeating themselves as fiercely as if they had never happened before.” What this
quote means is that exist just countable themes to talk about, and that people use to
create art in general, but also that people never get bored and actually wants it like
something they have never heard of. We as human beings just can talk about what we see
or about what we think which in essence is the same in everyone but just the themes. For
example family is general but there are people with no family, there are people who have an
entire family or that consider friends as family and that part depends on the person and
on what that person lived and lives, basically experiences. People write about what they
know.
The strong force is a chapter of a text called Master plot 20 written by Ronald Tobias
who explains in this chapter how to build a story with the basic themes that still an
intriguing story. First explains every author needs and have their own way to write and even
if they are similar would never be the same. People write according to their vocabulary
and their experiences but even if two people write about exactly the way they express and
the real message they want to give would never be the same. Authors need to find and
a unique way to write a story with the purpose of getting someone’s interest. Also, a writer has
to focus on the structure of the story so what the story says needs to have originality in a
part. The plot needs to be built with own experiences or own ideas from creativity.
Maybe there are a lot of love stories about sick people who suddenly were no sicker,
the originality is in the person that took the risk and made in his story that the cycle of life
win and killed the main character. But then you see a lot of those stories but someone
says why not in this case this sick person falls in love with a serial killer. Your story could
be exactly the same but if you use your own idea and develop your creativity you will have
relative originality.
Even when the general theme is the same as all the world stories you can still explore
your creativity and create a story full of originality. In my experience, I think we read
in books perspectives of life and even in a zombie movie there is always a human topic
based on what we see or live every single day. Because art is the way we express what
sometimes words cannot or even things that just cannot be explained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, i think, in general, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 13.8261648746 282% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3087.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 673.0 407.700716846 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58692421991 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09335287823 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35268058685 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39970282318 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 990.0 618.680645161 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3593201919 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.217391304 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2608695652 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 42.0 4.53405017921 926% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0451461305126 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171556091459 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555905271988 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0144837775959 0.150856017488 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648437760292 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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