They say you are what you wear, and in Bolivia, that's especially true. Clothes are political there. For a long time, the indigenous Aymara peolple faced discrimination from their European leaders. The prejudice hasn't disappeared but there is more of a move for indigenous people to reclaim their heritage.
Indigenous Aymara people wear typical clothes that became to be very expensive. actually, comparing the price, a typical Aymara hat has almost the same price value as three casual Brazilian clothes like a pair of pants, a t-shirt, and a sweater.
In addition to this information, local people make some famous show competition to demonstrate the elegance, the colorful and the importance of this kind of clothes, and of course, because of marketing issues.
However, most of local indigenous do not wear their typical clothes along the week; they only wear them when they go back home on weekends. this fact is because most of them feel discriminated. In contrast at the present, the actual government protect their rights in order to reduce discrimination. Actually, I believe they do not appreciate their origin as their ancestors used to do it before. Their love to their customs is fading away and they use the excuse of "discrimination" to cause controversy just because they want to catch the attention of authorities to get better political opportunities and to have better standard of life.
There are people that make big movements for indigenous, even most of the leaders are not real indigenous, that means all of their life were spent in a city; they take the chance to show companion and power inside the masses in order to use indigenous people to make them follow easily due the real facts, most of them do not have the chance to improve their knowledge to defend their rights.
As mentioned, typical clothes are used by indigenous and non indigenous to establish power and create big movements to get their individual benefits; most of them already lost the appreciation of their origin, so they just follow their leaders and it is not fair for a nation with distinct and important cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Indigenous
indigenous aymara peolple wear typical clothes tha...
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Suggestion: Actually
...othes that became to be very expensive. actually, comparing the price, a typical aymara ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...air of pants, a t-shirt, and a sweater. In addition to this information, local p...
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Suggestion: This
...hem when they go back home on weekends. this factis bacause most of them feel discri...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...use most of them feel discriminated. In contrast at the present, the actual government p...
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...ant to catch the attention of autorities to get better political opportunities an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, in addition, in contrast, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00986842105 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92136192945 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.860669462 49.2860985944 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.3 110.228320801 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 21.698381199 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169527198286 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726453200351 0.0996497079465 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054378567761 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861093729411 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413963621209 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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