super heros
Superheroes are a gift from God to help people, they make our life safe and we can live a peaceful life on our planet. Some stories happened in my city that are very interesting for people to know.
First, there was a stealer, he goes inside all the houses and takes other people's stuff there walet, gold, diamonds, and money. Suddenly the hero was walking around the neighborhood. He saw the stealer that stole everyone’s stuff, the secret hero started running after him until he caught him. Then he took him to the police station and they put him in jail.
Second, one day there was a magic show in the city, the guy who was doing a magic show made a mistake on his play that was going to end up with a huge bum that would explode at any moment. Meanwhile, the Magic hero was watching the play and he felt that there was a problem with the guy. He had a little experience about magic and he knew that it would hurt all the people. He jumped to the guy and took the hat and throughed it to the river.
Third, the hero planned to go fishing. He got everything ready then he went on the boat, crossed the river to the middle of the ocean, he started fishing, after an hour and half he saw a shark, so he said what would I do? I'm a hero! so I have to do something good. He kept on thinking and said u know what? I would jump before the shark eats all the fishes. they needed to stay alive. He jumped and fought the shark, he killed it and put it on the boat. After that he brought it to the Fish Market.
Without heros, A Lot of trouble would have happened and our life would be difficult. Heros are our life savior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to know. First, there was a stealer, he goes inside all the houses and takes ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...aw a shark, so he said what would I do? Im a hero! so I have to do something good....
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Line 8, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... so he said what would I do? Im a hero! so I have to do something good. He kept on...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...p before the shark eats all the fishes. they needed to stay alive. He jumped and fou...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k, he killed it and put it on the boat. After that he brought it to the Fish Market. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16772151899 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10451127664 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3785191473 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.85 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927373992528 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478868507675 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770695689368 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568840667511 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346483025593 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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