Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
teachers are vital parts of machinery for developments of society as a whole. Personally, i believe class="that">that teachers in the class="past">past were high valued and respected people compared to nowadays. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, elitism and authoritism were more deeply rooted in the people of the class="past">past, and also some parts of the world, especially in asian countries strict custom and culture class="that">that highly value teachers were prevailed. class="my">my country's traditional culture class="is">is a compelling example of this. class="my">my country, Mongolia, has a long tradition of class="buddhist">buddhist culture class="that">that rooted deeply into the minds of people. In class="buddhist">buddhist culture, teachers are valaued class="even">even more class="than">than the Buddha himself, and class="buddhist">buddhist people take a class="teacher">teacher's word as a command of a king. class="even">even though class="my">my country became less religious to non religious class="due">due to communism, people in the communist era still hold the class="same">same value class="that">that class="teacher">teacher as someone class="superior">superior and class="have">have value. this class="view">view has lost its intense since class="my">my country became democratic. Now people class="view">view class="teacher">teacher as someone who class="is">is doing his job and may not be class="superior">superior because class="he">he or class="she">she class="is">is class="same">same as anyone else.
Secondly, class="due">due to technological advances and development of information technology, especially class="internet">internet, knowledge or class="process">process of getting information has become easly. As a result teachers, class="even">even for somecases, seem unnecessary or class="even">even against one's class="process">process of acquiring knowledge. To be more specific, nowadays there are tons of educational websites and online materials class="that">that anyone class="can">can use anytime. In the class="past">past college students must wrote everything down in order to keep class="up">up with class, but nowadays the most lessons of classes class="can">can be found from class="internet">internet. If student misses class, class="he">he or class="she">she class="can">can easily catch class="up">up class. As information prevails its value decrease so class="that">that of a class="teacher">teacher. The position of teachers class="have">have become more of guide class="than">than knowledge giver.
In conclusion, i strongly believe class="that">that the value of teachers has decreased. this class="is">is because the respectful culture of appreciating teachers are over and advancement of information technologu.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3035.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.67142857143 4.8611393121 178% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.68793392691 2.67179642975 325% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 868.5 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.51630824373 165% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3446550708 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.736842105 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0429235211852 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420520251932 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462779779233 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729338113345 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502610079328 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 11.7677419355 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.94 58.1214874552 -39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.1575268817 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.01 10.9000537634 303% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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