There are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth. Agree or disagree
Always telling truth in every condition is necessary. On the other hand, some people believe that sometime telling lie is also better. I agree with this statement. I have two reasons for that my believe, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, At time when someone is feel happy and satisfactaction just because of your lie ,then it better to not ot tell truth. There are some circumtances is arround us in which we bound with some limitation and this limitation is provokes us to telling lie to the another person. My own experience is better enough to explain this point. In march 2020 the corona virus panadamic is coming as nightmare in our life. At that time my father is also infectd by this corona virus. In the early days he just facing difficulties in breathing. But, in the later stage he suffer more problem. Inspite of knowing this was a very serious case, the team doctor say you will become fine in just week. As result, of that doctor's lie my father geeting positive responce and he will be fit and fine now.
Secondly, telling lie to someone is a appropriate way to maintai relation that person. If you says direcly a bitter truth to any person then it will hurt the inner soul of that people. Instead of that if you says sweet lie to that people then this person will be happy. For example, In school days i was very naughty. I was doing everything in my school excludeing study. Once upon a time my math teacher was teaching us a math formula. At the same time someone s blew up the aeroplane made out of paper from the back side of the class. Teacher was having doubt on me, So she kicked me out of the class. But i know who blew that plane. If i was telling truth to the teacher then there was my friendship in danger. So, I telling lie to the teacher and by that way, i was able to maintain balance between my punishment and my friendship
In conclution, I agree with the statement that, sometimes telling lie is aslo acceptable, there is no need to tell truth everytime. Because it will provide happy moments to someone and to bebe the part of relation, also to sustain that relations.
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...ill provide happy moments to someone and to bebe the part of relation, also to su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44783715013 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42593076542 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3139095643 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.92 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.72 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185317172993 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496080798761 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665005358236 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132913420643 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305632756107 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.