Internet emergence, indeed, was a phenomenal breakthrough in last decades. It was one of scarce things that developed dramatically with the assistance of people. The most valuable factor and the most controversial fact about the internet is the information that it carries and provide for people with no exception in age, race, or sex. This information is acceptable and appreciable for some people, although it causes convention for others. Even though information can be detrimental and harmful by misusing the internet, in my view, internet is more valuable than causing harm because of two important reason.
First, the internet enhance the widespread knowledge, which is science and technology. There is online encyclopedia, science magazines, and high technology news centers with many variations in contents, specific for different ages and tastes. It help people who seek for improving their knowledge and learn important stuff for purposes they follow. For example, the internet helped me enormously in preparing my research as a master thesis. There was an arduous task that impeded my research track to reach my final sought-after goal. Unfortunately in this step, no one knew what is the solution to my problem. I got devastated, and spontaneously searched the internet for my problem. A topic on a website came up in my browser which took my attention. Therefore, I clicked open it and it showed me my solution to the problem. This example showed me that the internet is capable of afford approximately all the information in universe, and if you use it right, you will get the best out of it.
Second, it helps you decide what to buy and make it easy for you. Actually, shopping is one of the hardest tasks for women and one of the most boring and tedious things for men. Shopping websites contain a vast variety of products in a prolonged list of categories which feel every taste and choices of people. They also have a sector for product reviews, which help the customer to decide which product is more suitable for him/her or which one satisfies him/her needs. For instance, I do not know anything about perfumes and fragrances because the scents are indifference for me. Due to that, I found a website which had a rating for fragrances. This website helped me a lot for buying a present, which I gave it to my wife as an anniversary gift. This website was a little sample of the whole products and differences in market, which the internet makes it simple and easy task for people who hate shopping.
- TOEFL TPO 13 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TOEFL TPO 08 - Integrated Writing Task 76
- essay TPO-23 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 73
- TPO 9 -Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...cific for different ages and tastes. It help people who seek for improving their kno...
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Line 3, column 955, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...ormation in universe, and if you use it right, you will get the best out of it. Se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92723004695 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82569928919 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537558685446 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7314887859 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2608695652 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78260869565 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174612451839 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521463515478 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441788691646 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130032695449 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360940248164 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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