TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Nowadays, the internet has a great effect on people's lives. This new invention has recently been used as a source of information. With this in mind, a controversy exists as to whether the internet provides a valuable information for people or not. Some people believe that the internet is a valuable source of data; on the contrary, others believe that this technology provides a great number of problems through the information which is given to people. I, personally, subscribe to former group's idea for quite a few reasons, two conspicuous of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first reason I want to mention about the effectiveness of the internet, in terms of information, is that information on the internet is always up-to-date in comparison to another data which is available on the books or on television. For example, when I was in university, one of my professors gave me a project to conduct. therefore, I started to acquire some information about this project, and I studied some valuable books in the relevant field, but unfortunately, I did not get any data that help me through this project. My fother recommended me to search the topic on the internet and surf the internet to reach my desire. After searching on the internet, I finally found up-to-date data and eventually is so doing, I could to finish the project precisely and got a good grade. Therefore, the internet can help people with providing such up-to-date information.
The second reason to illustrate the importance of the internet is that the internet provides a wide variety range of information such as sport, news, economic, politic, to name but a few. Everybody can meet their needs via the internet. If people want to be informed about a specific area they can search the internet and receive some information about it. For instance, whenever I want to pursue some news about my favorite football team, I go to the internet and get the latest news about my team. I remember that one day I was at work, and there were a lot of tasks to do and focused on them. Therefore, I did not know that my favorite team will play a match, which will be held on the semi-final in the champions league. Using the internet, I was informed that that important match will be held on the same day. As a result, I managed my works and all of the tasks were done, and I go home and watch that match. all in all, that the internet provides a broad range of information.
TO sum up, by taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, one can believe that not only does the internet provide a great deal of information but also provides up-to-date data which can lead us to this conclusion that the internet is a valuable source of information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...s a great effect on peoples lives. This new invention has recently been used as a source of i...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...With this in mind, a controversy exists as to whether the internet provides a valuable inform...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...rofessors gave me a project to conduct. therefore, I started to acquire some information ...
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Line 5, column 853, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ay. As a result, I managed my works and all of the tasks were done, and I go home and watc...
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Line 5, column 917, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...ne, and I go home and watch that match. all in all, that the internet provides a br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73319327731 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82932188325 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457983193277 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9368526355 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231539784085 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807925180774 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717931982994 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159876265377 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502527110433 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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