TPO-19: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of the society and technology, people have easier access to information than they used to be. In order to keep up with the latest events and be well-informed, I agree that a person must get information from many different news resources.
First of all, nowadays different medias have different standpoints, people should read news from different resources to get information from different perspective, in order to understand the topic in a more comprehensive way. For example, during the last president election of United States, the news topics were all about scandals and personal attacks between the two candidates. By that time, different TV channels had completely different news based on their political standpoints, in which some of them supported one candidate and reported all the positive news about that candidate, while the other TV channels did the opposite. Therefore, if people only focus on one specific news resources, they will be influenced by those perspectives, which is not objective at all.
Moreover, one single news resource normally does not cover significant range of information, because most of them only focus on their specialized areas. For example, entertainment magazine only cover the gossips of the stars while economic magazine only focus on the knowledge of business and financial areas. If we want to obtain a variety of knowledge and information about different aspects, we need to get information from many different news resources.
Last but not least, even though access to a variety of news resources could make people become well-informed, it is also important for us to learn how to sort out the news resources and utilize them wisely. Only when we use the resources correctly, can we avoid being overwhelmed by the large amount of information we get everyday.
In summary, getting information from many different news resources does make people become well-informed, as long as they utilize the news resources wisely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...that a person must get information from many different news resources. First of all, nowad...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...spects, we need to get information from many different news resources. Last but not least, ...
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... the large amount of information we get everyday. In summary, getting information fr...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... In summary, getting information from many different news resources does make people become ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31962025316 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97571184758 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7669425808 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.083333333 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315106361334 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134671694188 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12373782056 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208284786333 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109589667619 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.