Tpo 2
without a shadow of a doubt, nowadays it is widely accepted that a healthy relationship is necessary for the mental health of families' members. children blossom in families and they are grounds of society. an ill relationship can hurt them psychologically and as a result in future happiness will be omitted from that society. An ineluctable query which always has been the topic of contention and brought about heated debates is whether telling the truth is the most important ground of a relationship or not. As far as I am concerned this point of view seems logical. In what follows, I will cogently delve into my paramount reasons to justify my viewpoint.
I want to illustrate my first reason by mentioning a theory. based on Maslow's hierarchy, happiness and truthfulness are keys to an active society. Based on what Moslow says if we take the truth from families, confidence will be omitted too and this will also make the family less happy. the mentioned family is a mentally ill family and it would not have to be an active part of a society, it will just cost money for the government and soon they will also be denied by the society. It is somehow obvious that this is not an ideal relationship.
Another equally noteworthy reason is that if we omit the truth in a society, helping others will be omitted too consequently. as an example, I want to mention Tehran the capital of Iran. Because of the bad economic situation of Iran truth was gradually sacrificed for economic benefit. people started to tell lies in order to convince others to do what is good for them beneficially. because of the mentioned reason, we can easily epitomize Tehran, as a city of lies. this process led Tehran to what it is now. nobody trust even his closest friend. no one helps a poor because they think maybe he is lying to get money. this is the exact form of an ill society which no one will help and definitely, it is not ideal.
last but not least I want to give an example. after spreading Covid-19 Iran's government started to tell lies in order to conceal its weak points and tell the world that "we are as strong as modern countries". As a result, people did not attend to World health organization's protocols and they got insusceptible to this deadly virus. It is a beautiful quote from the new TV series "Chernobil" that is worthy to be mentioned, "what is the cost of lies". they definitely cost the lives of people and what is more valuable?
to recapitulate, considering the mentioned reasons above, one can safely conclude that, without a shadow of a doubt, truth is the most important consideration in society and must be respected in both families' relationships and also in between strangers. there re other reasons and examples elaborating on this idea which are not mentioned above due to the shortage of time.
- Tpo 2 3
- TPO 01 At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support 70
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people 73
- at universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive financial support 70
- TPO 01 Independent Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77016129032 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89880656038 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506048387097 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.542330147 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6296296296 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3703703704 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59259259259 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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