TPO 25 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People make different arguments on the contribution of young people to their communities. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that little time out of youngsters´ schedule is set to dedicate to communities´ benefits. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, juveniles do not actively engage in public activities due to the fact that they have to work hard to make ends meet. People have to focus their time and energy on working longer hours at their office to compensate for the rising cost of living and heavy competition in the labor market especially in big metropolitan areas. For some fresh graduates, they are even forced to do extra jobs during the night so that they earn enough cash to pay for their basic needs like accommodation and food. As a result, little time is left for supporting their communities. My own experience is a compelling example. I am living in Madrid which is an expensive city. Therefore, I have to do an extra job of three hours every weekday in addition to my regular insurance work so as to I can afford the monthly rent of my apartment. Hence, I take part in any social activities occurring in my district once in a blue moon.
Secondly, teenagers prefer spending their time on entertainment activities like playing video games, surfing the internet to helping their communities. There is now an array of addicting activities on the internet that grips great attention of adolescents. Consequently, they are indifferent to other more useful actions. My cousin´s experience exemplifies this idea. He is obsessed with writing posts on Facebook and spends most of the time during the day to read and give comments on his friend´s virtual pages. As such, he does not take care of anything else happening around him.
In conclusion, various factors are to blame for the fact that adolescents do not dedicate adequate time to helping the county they are living in. Two of which are that they are too busy making their living and that they are reluctant to donate their time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n addition to my regular insurance work so as to I can afford the monthly rent of my apa...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91036414566 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90371771221 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.001738637 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2631578947 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213665704257 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591437755809 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559689681815 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133001522084 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390702910458 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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