TPO-27 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and ex
Competition on the great jobs is always intense. People do their best from the school time and university to fetch the best job they have ever imagined. Although taking a secure job as soon as it is available may fulfil some ones' need according to their special condition, in my point of view it worths to wait for a more satisfying job. While performing your satisfying work, you are more motivated and enthusiastic to develop in it and rarely feel boring.
First, indisputably, people who work in their enjoyable field feel much better than who does not do due to the fact that they find it practical and attractive which seems to be designed in allignment to their talents. People easily develop in such atmosphere and would achieve high level of skill. For example, my brother loved the cars and trucks enormously in his childhood. He found the cars as the materials satisfiying his desire, he searched prety much about them and finally successeded to work as a mechanichal engineer in a company. As he works in his satisftiying field, he is always enthusiastic about his job. In addition, his self confidence has increased after achieving great positions.
Second, people who wait until a satisfying job is provided are free from feeling bored during their life. Unlike the people who work in a mandatory job which is not appriciated by their personlity, those who are active in a desirable occupation never feel negative emotions after a long time working hour. For instance, I remember a sergean in a famous hospital who was always in a perfect mood inspite of difficult operations he had every day. He revealed his prosperity point and that was the love he had in doing operations. In order to feel positive in all of aspects of life, people should follow their enjoying fields.
In conclusion, it is preffered to follow a satisfying job as it contributes to more motivation and less boredom. As jobs include most of our life, we should pay attention if they are compatible with our personality and intrests.
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- TPO 64 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own Use 54
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- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO 47 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life 40
- TPO 35 Agree or disagree In twenty years there will be fewer cars than today 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83815028902 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77732882722 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3441317398 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222223952388 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728644654086 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530770034053 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152286103747 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661675109462 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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