TPO-31
The globalization is the constant factor in the society. The world is changing because of the globalization. People now think that the globalization is the factor for the unhappiness of their lives. However, in my opinion, I am much satisfied with my life due to the quick changes in the world. The constant change can make my career interesting, and It could help to fulfill my dream. I will elaborate my views in the following essay.
First and for most, the constant and quick changes in the world could also experience in the workplace.The development of technology or exploration of new methods of treating patients can be interesting. I could utilize new technology or invention at my office, and it could make my work much interesting. For example, I was working as a dentist at my uncle's office. He is old and likes to use old methods in his office. He doesn't have the digital x-ray machine at his office. I used a manual method to develop X-ray for each patient. I worked there for at least three years. After three years, I was bored with practicing dentistry. I even thought I should change my career. However, after leaving my uncle's office at the town, I decide to work in a metro city before I change my career. Once I started working here, I found it interesting. The office where I am working now is a multidisciplinary office with all equipment and latest technology. They keep the office updated with the new machine. Deu to this, I found the work interesting. I feel I learn every day new things in the office. It makes my job much exciting. I could grow each day by learning new things. We have many technologies available from the foreign country at our office. Without quick and constant change the professional life would have become tiresome.
Second, due to the quick changes and constant development, I would be able to fulfill my dream. Who would not be happy If he finds out that the globalization will help him to let his dream come true?. It is my childhood dream to travel to the other planet. However, so far I knew that only the scientist or the astronauts could travel to the other planet. Recently, there was an announcement. General people can buy tickets and travel to the planet. Wow! I am excited; I could not wait for the day when I will be traveling to another planet. However, I am happy because it is happening. I will be able to chase my childhood dream. It only became possible because of the globalization and the hard work of the international scientist team.
In conclusion, as the world is changing fast, It is also helping us to stay interested in the professional work and fulfill our dreams like to travel on the moon. Therefore, it is much satisfying.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, at least, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62993762994 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84441068642 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438669438669 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 27.0 9.59856630824 281% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0483807684 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1891891892 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91891891892 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88709677419 368% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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