TPO-32:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Views differ significantly on whether young people today is influential to the society. Some people thinks that young people is influencing the important decisions related to the future of the society, other people holds the opposite opinion. As far as I am concerned, young people definitely have influence on decisions determining the future of society as a whole.
First of all, young people are the pioneers who adopt the new technology and then bring huge influence to the whole society.
For example, Mark Zuckberg was only twenty year old when he found Facebook. At that time, nobody understood the idea of social media and the remarkable power behind it was not recognized, but Zuckberg adopted the new technology and lead us to the new world. Now he is not only a successful business owner but also an important people who is influencing the society by donating most of his money to help those people in need around the world.
Moreover, young people are the most courageous in the society to express their opinion in public, thus having significant influence on the decisions made by the government. For example, young people nowadays are very good at using effective channels to speak out their voice, such as matching on the street and spreading out comment over Internet. Yet sometimes this type of activities organized by young people has gone across the line, it is undeniable that the government always comprise if too many people are involved.
Last but not least, every move of the young generation is affecting the development of a country. For example, Japan's economy has become so depressed because most Japanese young generation do not have the desire to fight for living like their previous generation did. The whole middle east is in a chaos because a group of young people who are extreme terrorists are taking the leadership of some organizations.
For all the reasons stated above, I agree that young people today do have influence on the important decisions that determine the future of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02064896755 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66665361419 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533923303835 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2354326536 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30277027812 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12176260143 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11032108013 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18607209404 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121433522829 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.