Yes, i agree with following statement says that the student will get more benefit when the working like team than individual because when you come to in the concept of project work, it content so many aspect. For example, if I am doing project on population study, I am alone can not get the data which I need, I need someone help and that someone is my team members without it is highly impossible to complete the project work.
Firstly, Knowledge and skill will grow when we are sharing with each other, if we are not sharing it then growth will be diminished dramatically. Moreover, while working as a team students can build every good relationship each other but when your working alone even if build your skills still you will be lacking in good communication skills that is every important in day today life.
Secondly, I want to explore my own experience when I was doing by college project. My project was physical therapy effect on bronchial asthma, myself, my friends Praba and Ram doing this project. We divided this project work among us. For example Praba, he used to collect the data from internet, myself I used to collect the patient data from the hospitals and Ram, he collected post treatment data from the patients. After collecting all these this data we started discussing about which have already collected. From that discussion we learn so many things from each other which is highly impossible for me to gain that much knowledge with given period of time.
Thirdly, we are not only shared knowledge but also i got the chance expose in different culture with them, I am from different native language from my friend Ram. In those days i learned different culture, food habit and different dressing style, these additional things which learned from teammates apart from my project work.
Finally, I would like to says that someone extraordinary i their work. when these students doing project work with they may not get the individual reward for them, the credits goes for the entire team. May be this point they may get upset but when you compare the disadvantages with advantages then individual work looks mere whereas team overwhelm that demerits with it's merids. So i conclude that the team work will gives better knowledge to students than individual work.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Suggestion: contents
...e to in the concept of project work, it content so many aspect. For example, if I am d...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
... concept of project work, it content so many aspect. For example, if I am doing project on...
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... content so many aspect. For example, if I am doing project on population study,...
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.... For example, if I am doing project on population study, I am alone can not get...
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Suggestion: helps
...t the data which I need, I need someone help and that someone is my team members wit...
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...ally. Moreover, while working as a team students can build every good relationship each ...
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...d every good relationship each other but when your working alone even if build yo...
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... good relationship each other but when your working alone even if build your skills...
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...ortant in day today life. Secondly, I want to explore my own experience when I...
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... post treatment data from the patients. After collecting all these this data we start...
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... to gain that much knowledge with given period of time. Thirdly, we are not only shared kno...
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... are not only shared knowledge but also i got the chance expose in different cult...
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...t culture with them, I am from different native language from my friend Ram. In t...
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...guage from my friend Ram. In those days i learned different culture, food habit a...
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...oject work. Finally, I would like to says that someone extraordinary i their wor...
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...ike to says that someone extraordinary i their work. when these students doing pr...
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...at someone extraordinary i their work. when these students doing project work with ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
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...e credits goes for the entire team. May be this point they may get upset but whe...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...whelm that demerits with its merids. So i conclude that the team work will gives ...
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Suggestion: give
.... So i conclude that the team work will gives better knowledge to students than indiv...
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...ledge to students than individual work.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231308411215 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.170560747664 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0747663551402 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0630841121495 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0957943925234 0.0685040099705 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116822429907 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0420560747664 0.0351676179071 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46480325828 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018691588785 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0700934579439 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233644859813 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0280373831776 0.0139019557991 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2329.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 392.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94132653061 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313775510204 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257653061224 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145408163265 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104591836735 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46480325828 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.1174201832 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4493744225 48.84282405 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5625 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.644075263715 194% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.54480286738 433% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.2653061224 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.18439716312 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262021141971 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126409500082 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944767981366 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548183752375 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17366822499 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973937162706 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702296053811 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.133125501445 0.336927656856 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0580022344064 0.067059652881 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153439064188 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833643570278 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.