The passage and the lecture discussing the reason why the ancient animals are so larger size but in very contradict ways.The reading suggests that the excessive oxygen, plant and warmer climate contributes animals grow in larger size but the professor refutes the all point made in reading passage.
Firstly, reading passage says that earlier animals are bigger in size because it uses to have more oxygen which helps the animals to grow in larger size because oxygen basic things for the growth. Bit the speaker contrast this point by stating that during stage of life there was larger number volcanic activities which cause the poisonous of air in the atmosphere so there will be less available for growth.
Secondly, reading passage states that earlier in there was more plants was there which has lots of nutrient. This nutrient helps the animals to grow faster and the bigger size. But the professor refuses this point by given the evidence of fossil record which claims that nutrient was very less available during that earlier time. Moreover cl2 was contaminated due to surrounding pollution, actually main ingredient of nutrient.
Thirdly, reading passage explains that the warmer climate favour the growth of animal and stimulate factor which cause excessive skeletal growth. But again the lecturer contrast this point by stating that larger the animal size in hot weather has great disadvantages for it's growth because in order to maintain the body temperature it supposed to lose the heat that could cost lots of energy, so the larger will be used to maintain the body temperature and not growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...larger size but in very contradict ways.The reading suggests that the excessive oxy...
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...aker contrast this point by stating that during stage of life there was larger nu...
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...ess available during that earlier time. Moreover cl2 was contaminated due to surrounding...
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...of nutrient. Thirdly, reading passage explains that the warmer climate favour...
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...assage explains that the warmer climate favour the growth of animal and stimulat...
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... weather has great disadvantages for its growth because in order to maintain the ...
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...the body temperature and not growth.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286738351254 0.261695866417 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.164874551971 0.158904122519 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931899641577 0.0723426182421 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501792114695 0.0435111971325 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.010752688172 0.0277247811725 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121863799283 0.128828473217 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0394265232975 0.0370669169778 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36877537202 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0250896057348 0.0208969081088 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10752688172 0.128158765124 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010752688172 0.0158828679856 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0286738351254 0.0114777025283 250% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1632.0 1645.83664459 99% => OK
No of words: 264.0 271.125827815 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18181818182 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405303030303 0.374372842146 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295454545455 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159090909091 0.187439937562 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0871212121212 0.113142543107 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36877537202 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.7641605277 53.8517498576 83% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 29.3333333333 21.7502111507 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.2040358827 49.3711431718 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.333333333 132.220823453 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 21.7502111507 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.878197800319 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.39072847682 236% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 58.8787878788 50.5018328374 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.98412698413 1.90840788429 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528562625753 0.549887131256 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.171870019201 0.142949733639 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119940418672 0.0787303798458 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.67009824833 0.631733273073 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181647457219 0.139662658121 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280163732796 0.266732575781 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126011876076 0.103435571967 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3960152891 0.414875509568 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0558039843128 0.0530846634433 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399084764958 0.40443939384 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669466780791 0.0528353158467 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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