TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and ex

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TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The question is whether young people in this modern civilization are capable of making their own decision rather than under the influence of their parents or not. It is needless to say that the advancement of technology and science has altered the way we think and live. In my opinion, I believe that peoples are making better decisions on their own now-a-days for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.

First and foremost, people in the past lacked the necessary data and information required to be self-dependent. They were not able to travel a lot, did not had the opportunity to change their jobs as well as go to university to broaden their views. As a result, they lacked experience and they were mostly dependent to their parents to make the decisions for themselves. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. For instance, my father was the eldest son in the family and had to bear the responsibility of the family of four persons.This situation provided no scope to my father to explore the job direction he wanted and had to rely on my grandfather established business. Thus, my father lacked the experience to make a decision on his own.

Secondly, no one has to say the effect of modern technology in our day to day life. It has changed radically the way we live in the society making life more easy and flexible. It provides us the opportunity to explore different things at a time. All the electronic devices and internet paved the path of our modernization and made it possible to have the experience with broad ranges of things virtually. For example, now-a-days we can share our thoughts and experiences with other people through social media and different blogs. Moreover, we can protest the government, challenge the court and so on. All this aspects are making ourselves more and more self-confident. Therefore, we are getting more self-reliant. Additionally, there is no doubt that technology has modified our habits and altered our personality in some way that we are no longer dependent on others experience. We have our faith on our own experience.

In sum, the conclusion could be drawn that, the availability of information and surge of technological advancement made the young people this days more self- confident and able take decisions on their own. Their personality evolved in this way and it will continuous to change with the course of time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... were not able to travel a lot, did not had the opportunity to change their jobs as...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perience to make a decision on his own. Secondly, no one has to say the effect o...
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Line 4, column 608, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ent, challenge the court and so on. All this aspects are making ourselves more and m...
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Line 6, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...gical advancement made the young people this days more self- confident and able take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90498812352 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91896641414 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491686460808 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8109432214 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8636363636 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24332472871 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708411617744 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841058616438 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137044486228 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979213390473 0.0645574589148 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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