Planning and managing things in this modern life is an accepted subject with anybody. The ability of programming has a valued position for contemporary human being because of its importance. I think it is vital particularly for all young people to learn how to organize in this complex era.
First, complexity of life means a person confronts many items in journey from birth to death and this requires a preparation in facing with them. So young people should have a program to handle many upcoming events in their life. In developed societies an eighteen years old person should set many goals for his college years, job finding, professional career, marriage, parent role playing and so on. Designing plan helps people to turn the light in darkness of their life trip.
Second, in our new universe we have many technologies which make living very intricate in comparison to simple past years. Advent of internet and automation is changing anything as fast as we can imagine that just setting prediction and seeing further days can help humans to survive in this overwhelmed life.
In other point, nowadays our world has became a professional game which people should compete in to survive and improve their generation. We know that people try to overcome each other to catch better opportunities in universities, job offers or any other significant moments. Hence in order to win any competition you should have strategy and tactic from the starting second and it is the reason why young people as a beginner player must have the skill to plan strategy.
In conclusion, this puzzled life with many aspects and problems teaches human being to be ready and aware to overcome many severeness could be happened and scheming and projecting the subsequent coming days is necessary in every region and any culture in worldwide.
- TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for 88
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 70
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide.What is the cause of this?What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough? 89
- Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the cause of this and what are some solutions 78
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... In other point, nowadays our world has became a professional game which people should...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ffers or any other significant moments. Hence in order to win any competition you sho...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun severeness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much severeness', 'a good deal of severeness'.
Suggestion: much severeness; a good deal of severeness
...being to be ready and aware to overcome many severeness could be happened and scheming and proj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03947368421 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67416204806 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1064000203 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206212713477 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768939837488 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472392940564 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108369937496 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066384976044 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.