TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
With the advancement of modern technology and improvement in the communication medium, our life is getting more and more sophisticated. To cope up with this pace of life, one must be very adaptive in his/her daily schedules and keep a track of tasks has to be done. No one can deny the fact that there are both positive and negative aspects of having organizational and planning skills. As far as I'm concerned, I definitely think that the modern life of people requires the skills of planning and organizing. Even though some individuals posit that it is okay to not to have those skills as one can manage to survive anyway, it is my firm belief that ability to contrive tasks is important for a plethora of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent passages.
First and foremost, a good plan of day to day task will keep any individual more engaged with his work, and which will in turn increase the productivity. When we have a plan on which work has to be done in first and which to be later, we are more conscious about our schedule. Thus, we can eliminate the unnecessary spare time and even breakdown. I have to admit that my opinion on this fact has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. For instance, I have been working as a teacher in a school for the last three years. I've always tried to do my job according to its specific time and kept a track of the things I've done and which I have to do in the upcoming days. This way, I can reduce the stress and workload of my office. I don't think without my ability to work and plan with proportion to time, I wouldn't have been able to manage.
Secondly, organizing the works and necessary steps for accomplishing the task makes the availability of more leisure time so that we can have much time to spend with our family and relax. This will slowly, but surely improve the output of an individual and make the person more goal oriented. To illustrate this more thoroughly, my uncle is a renowned doctor in our city and he barely has any spare time. He has to work very hard maintaining the workload and his responsibility as a father as well as a husband. In such situation, what do you think would be the consequence? After 10 years, my aunt and uncle separated and never met one another again. This wouldn’t have happened if my uncle was able to plan and organize his workload in such way both his profession and family would be balanced.
It is undeniable that our society changes at such a quick pace that we cannot plan everything in previous. But this by no means implies that the ability is not important. Without a plan, complex things will only get more complicated. Abraham Lincoln reportedly once said, “If I had 60 minutes to cut down a tree, I would spend 40 minutes sharpening the ax and 20 minutes cutting it down.” Planning is just like “sharpening the ax”, which will no doubt facilitate a task easy done.
In sum, I strongly believe that planning and organizing skills will definitely come in handy when we have to deal with the complexities associated with our modern life. Everyone should practice these skills to prepare for any challenge given by the modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56057494867 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67282358828 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488706365503 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4039718654 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.954545455 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1363636364 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174465328271 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555735311587 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475066456191 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130302784624 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528958534193 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.