Traditions are defined as customary or established ways of
doing things in a family, community, or culture. Some people
believe that it is important to follow traditions even when those
traditions conflict with or are quite different from their own
individual preferences. Other people believe that individual
preferences are more important than traditions. Which view do
you agree with, and why?
one of the frequently discussed questions in the modern society is whether traditions that run contrary to personal preferences should be abandoned or kept. Regarding this issue, I believe that priority should be given to individual preferences as opposed to traditions.
In the first place, many traditions greatly undermine the values that are consistent with the progress of the modern society, so keeping these traditions could be harmful to the modern society. consider the example of china in the ancient past. In the ancient china, there was a well-kept tradition that women should never receive any forms of education, whether formal or informal. But education can provide people, regardless of gender, with the values, skills, and insights that can equip them to build a better world. Today we have lots of talented females who are well-educated and make contributions to the world: there are always a large number of famous female politicians, scientists and businesswomen that one can think of. therefore, lots of female talents who should have played an important role in the development of china had been lost in the long river history. Obviously, if we keep this ridiculous tradition, the world will see the loss of talented females. In addition, it undermines the value that people, regardless of gender, should be equal and deserve the same rights and that women should never be deprived of the right to receive proper education.
Another consideration is that many old-fashioned traditions might greatly harm the well-beings of citizens and the whole society. one old-fashioned tradition that can easily come to one’s mind is shaking hands. it is a good way to show respect and to strengthen the bond as well. unfortunately, in recent years, the worldwide pandemic of the coronavirus renders this traditional undesired or even harmful. this is because one major channel of the disease is the skin contact and this tradition, if kept, would lead to more and more transmissions and contribute to the prevalence of the disease. therefore, to better contain the disease and control the situation, citizens should be required to abandon this tradition despite its long history. one can also consider the tradition of burning paper bags to mourn for their deceased family members, kept in some parts of Japan and china. unfortunately, this tradition consumes a staggering amount of paper and emits a considerable amount of toxic gas that can seriously pollute the air and play a role in global warming. As a matter of fact, a large number of citizens were developing respiratory diseases as victims of terrible air conditions in modern society. therefore, for environmental concerns, the tradition should be abandoned however big the lure is.
These considerations, presented as above, can be taken into account to support the view that we should abandon traditions for individual preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, as a matter of fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26180257511 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94184329426 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530042918455 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8854934055 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.761904762 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154828788599 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05053129614 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043903746885 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922611367393 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397889990317 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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