TPO52 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Debate rages over the increased strictness of rules for young people in modern society. From my perspective, whether these rules for youngsters are too strict is not a simple yes-or-no question. On the contrary, this issue should be analyzed on a case-by-case basis and the definitions of two abstract terms (i.e., societies and rules) should be given too.
In terms of schooling, young people nowadays indeed have to follow and obey some strict rules. A good example involves applying for a university abroad. In fact, if an average high school student wants to be admitted to a prestigious university abroad, he or she must make great efforts and go through a lot of processes. Specifically, students have to write their application letters, prepare their detailed personal statements and must achieve high scores in standardized language tests such as TOEFL and IELTS. Even if they do score high enough, these test-takers still need to confront more academic challenges like SAT or GRE, not to mention other societal expectations (academic or non-academic) they should live up to. these are the rigid rules for those young applicants: they have to do much more to gain a competitive edge, or face the fate of being rejected by their dream schools because of one missing link.
On the other hand, I do not find the rules aforementioned too strict. By that I mean these rules are necessarily and rightfully so. The reason is simple: without these strict rules, teenagers will never be able to meet the relevant standard or grow into well-rounded individuals. these rules aim to knock young, promising learners into shape. Hypothetically, if one student did not have good language, academic, or life skills, he or she might end up being isolated and lagging behind in a foreign environment. In this case, these stringent rules that young people should follow are indispensable, thereby enabling young people to have what it takes to further their study or their development.
In conclusion, despite the rigor of some social rules, they are largely well-intentioned and well-justified
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... or grow into well-rounded individuals. these rules aim to knock young, promising lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, as to, i mean, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92100583473 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.12511241 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196500516369 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696635513972 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609312190014 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105625245351 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640259636467 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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