In twenty years there will be fewer cars than there are these days
car use is vital transit of our life, we generally use our cars to go to the workplace, school, even traveling for long distance, more than using train and buses because it's convenience as well as cycle works.
However, I think that the high technology technique would change the way use of cars such as an emerging flying car thus there will be car user stay for the future. I'll elaborate on the reason that why I have this perspective is the following statement in this essay.
It's unrealistic to surmise that people will vanish use of cars in our life by a research of a current rate of our vehicle use and it shows that almost every single household has one car at least each. Let's take me as an example. I usually go to grocery shopping with my mother by car because we are sure to be burdensome to carry all the heavy shopping bags till to my house. The car is not only good at going out to travel or to commute but also easy to get work done, for instance, my story.
In the past decade, an abundance of new investment has been created which was considered impossible to be produced made by human beings before for instance, a color TV, mobile phone and so on. In the next several years, in that case, it's natural that car development will be greatly amplified and undoubtedly cars would be a flying car. In about such flying car consumption, people will be soon absorbed in new latest inventions because we all have sort of innate propensity to new ones. so that people will start using flying cars to go out shopping and to commute to a workplace.
Lastly, popping out of flying cars would bring us exquisite joy driving in the air, no more stuck in traffic jam on the road and tedious driving on the terrestrial course.
In a nutshell, it's much exact to say that modern cars will be replaced to such as flying cars for the user in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Car
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e will be car user stay for the future. Ill elaborate on the reason that why I have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... the following statement in this essay. Its unrealistic to surmise that people w...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... will vanish use of cars in our life by a research of a current rate of our vehicle use an...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
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...le household has one car at least each. Lets take me as an example. I usually go to ...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...undoubtedly cars would be a flying car. In about such flying car consumption, peop...
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Suggestion: So
... sort of innate propensity to new ones. so that people will start using flying car...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shopping and to commute to a workplace. Lastly, popping out of flying cars would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, at least, for instance, i think, sort of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42151162791 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53669493379 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2726477491 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243233308095 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969702036534 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727076293247 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135063682808 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636834222574 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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