There is no shortage of debate that we spend a long time with our associates doing our daily job. There are many characters of being good co-worker such as helpful, optimistic, flexible and finally aware of the job description. Our co-workers can make our job easy or so complicated their actions can make our day or totally let you want back home. I have my own reason and examples describing such kind of colleagues in the following essay.
personally speaking, one of the most wonderful characters can describe a co-worker is being optimistic. The way they look at their day ahead reflect how they feel inside. What values they carry and what concepts they have in their life. At the beginning of the day, we need Positive spirit and keep it the whole day as much you can. That helps everyone My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember the first day I got my job three years ago, I was so excited my feelings were amazing as finally, I got a job. on my first day, I see one of our associates and happily greet her good morning, she answered me what is food about this morning. I astonished with her unexpected answer. I felt terrible, and I avoided her until now. She carried her negative spirit and she doesn't realize the positive feeling is contagious and vice versa. To be honest I do my best all the time to avoid to see her. I believe that the person must be optimistic as much as we can to help us to work happily and peacefully.
In addition, to be optimistic, there is another character from my point of view which is being flexible. When you have a flexible co-worker is such a treasure. The ability to modify yourself according to the work schedule it is a great advantage. It is very helpful to another associate consequently can solve different issues at work. For example, my wife is early bird person and loves to work always at morning shift. On the hand, she gets panic if her boss assigned for her night shift to fill other co-workers position will be absent under any conditions. My wife, unfortunately, called in that time and hence they ask somebody else to attend that shift. No doubt her action had consequences and negative impact on her annual evaluation report.
To sum up, we spend about five days a week with our co-worker, it is so important to have positive optimistic and flexible associate improve the work environment and get things done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, hence, if, look, so, for example, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65258215962 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65191316505 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1671962199 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1739130435 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174058041328 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503312023059 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384327537544 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119263886739 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261227820964 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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