What is the most important animal in your country?
The relationship between human beings and animals is a very long one indeed. For tens of thousands of years animals have served as a source of food, labor, and companionship for humanity. Even in the technology-driven 21st century, animals still perform these roles. This importance of animals to human society is most easily seen in the cow. It provides us with meat, milk and leather; three products we are unable to manufacture synthetically. In my opinion, the cow is the most important animal in my country.
Firstly, humans have, for millennia, raised cows for the milk they produce. This liquid is an essential part of the human diet. For children it is a natural follower to the mother’s milk they drink when they are babies. As they grow older the calcium contained in milk helps them develop strong teeth and bones. For adults, too, milk features prominently in most people’s diet. Many find it difficult to drink coffee or tea without milk, and cereal, that commonly consumed breakfast dish, simply cannot be eaten without milk.
A further source of nourishment we derive from our bovine friends is beef. This has been an important source of protein for many societies since the early days of stock-raising. In recent years, the globalization of economic activity and particularly that of agriculture has led to beef penetrating the diets of those whose societies traditionally found other sources of protein. As fish stocks decline due to dangerous overfishing, beef seems certain to become an even more important part of many people’s daily consumption. Although there are alternative meat sources, such as pork and chicken, beef has greater appeal for many people.
Finally, though beef and milk are the products most people associate with cows, we must not forget leather. Although this material can be obtained from other animals, the most common kind of leather is produced using the hides of cows. It is a product used in the manufacture of bags, gloves, clothing and shoes. Of these, it is in the manufacture of shoes that cow leather is most important. Leather is not the only material used in the producing footwear, canvas and plastic also being common, but the leather is the strongest and the most comfortable, especially for formal or work shoes. Everyone in the developed world probably has at least one pair of these and the overwhelming majority will be made of leather.
In conclusion, the benefits which the cow offers to modern society are irreplaceable. We obtain important nourishment from its meat and its milk, and our feet are comfortably protected by its leather. A world without steaks, without cool glasses of milk, and with our feet encased in plastic would not be such a pleasant one. It is the cow that stands between us and such a world; consequently it is undoubtedly the most important animal in my country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many finds'.
Suggestion: Many finds
...prominently in most people's diet. Many find it difficult to drink coffee or tea wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, so, still, at least, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02510460251 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83137181855 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52510460251 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3785915126 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.962962963 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7037037037 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48148148148 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156030233095 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512781458186 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072848515423 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097818375565 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799052168159 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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