Which is better? To be the leader of a group or to be a member of group in which another person is the leader.
Some people think that being the leader of a group have a great benefits such as a clout, proud or more authority to influence the member of our team. however, in my opinion, there still leave the possibility of disadvantages becoming a significant position and advantages to be a follower in terms of the gain of individual or society as a whole.
To begin with, a leader need to burden copious of stress and problems what the member of group do not have to consider. For example, while a group member can concentrate on only given works from a boss, the group leader take a schedules of tasks from all members and manage them. In addition, the leader should participate every meetings as a representative of a group for the separation of sources or budgets with other team or discussion of the future which direction the higher group in the whole system must go.
On top of that, we learn more as a follower in a group than a leader. I'm a leader of group means not much learned seniors are in my group and I take amount of position to teach and manage the young generation than me. Therefore, the youngest person take higher probability to learn and improve their skill sets from the experienced senior in their group. Even though the leader perhaps take lessons from the boss of him, however, since the hierarchical structure of general group, there are few people who are experts than me.
To sum up, being an leader admittedly enables to realize benefits such as a flexible between the work and life ratio, it still leave disadvantages from administering each member of group. In this regard, what I think is the follower who involved in the group can learn more effectively and own more gains for their position in the society and the followship is much more important than the leadership to maintain or develope their group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: a schedule; schedules
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Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: leaves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70061728395 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64352347336 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509259259259 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7984554694 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 5.45110844103 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399197028399 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159909981745 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611295447088 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238271765622 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052641604889 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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