Why go to university?
I strongly believe that it is necessary for everyone to attend the university. Do Some people attend the university just in pursuit of a degree? Does the university provide a core motivate for to attend? I will try to examine the specific reasons for entering the university by compelling justifications.
I consider it as a turning point in the people life. It has helped me immensely in my personal life. Coming to the university is a new challenge for the people to expand their horizons both educationally and personally. It also it is an opportunity to involve in extracurricular activities. It is a small campus that allows the students to take the responsibility, organize events and be a part of the planning team. In addition, a degree from a university gives people certain identity that makes them stand out among their competitor. For example, going to university has made a big difference to my life. I think the most part of my characteristic makes up in the university. I
University is also an opportunity to broaden my prospect of life.
The second reason is important to say is that The university also can help the people to land a decent job and provides a host of job opportunities. Let's me explain. I graduated in medical science. I adore my major. All graduates in the medical science possess professional qualifications and don't need to worry about finding a job.
Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that many times studying at a university also means living a city far away from hometown. Therefore, this condition along with the new sense of the freedom and independency can be a harrowing experience for a someone. Furthermore, going to university is really expensive. The tuition fees and the books cost an arm and a leg and if you live away from home, you have to pay accommodation fees as well.
As I have illustrated, I think that there are advantages and disadvantages to go to the university. Should you go to attend a university course? Yes. It’s a no brainer. Go for it. Go to university! Just watch your money!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82253521127 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15496227347 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7257401533 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4074074074 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1481481481 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289259541072 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877501225993 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109557826969 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161886414985 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107268831775 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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