Why go to university?
People attend college for various reasons. Some people consider college as a challenge and others take it as a new experience. In my opinion, I think that people attend college to increase knowledge, meet new people and develop a career. Studying at a college can benefit a person greatly since it augments a person's knowledge, aids in developing a career and gives a chance to meet new people of different backgrounds.
Knowledge is such a powerful tool that possessing it can diminish nearly all life problems. A college or a university is the place where one can gain knowledge and become valuable to the society. An individual can acquire knowledge about a wide variety of subjects. When my brother was in college, he learned about bacteria and viruses. He had learned that at high school a little bit, but in college he studied it in depth. In addition, he also learned how deal with life problems in college.
Developing a career is a very important stage in our life. Most students, after graduating from high schools, go to colleges or universities to be trained and educated. Some major in various subjects while others go for professional degrees. Universities help students in achieving their goals by preparing them for the career they have picked. If I go to a medical school, I know that the school will prepare me well enough for me to become a successful medical doctor.
Interacting with new people is always a challenge. A university is a place where people from different backgrounds get opportunities to interact with each other. Information about different cultures, different life styles and certain types of food is shared among students. My father used to study at a university, and he told me about all the different cultural backgrounds of the students there. A college or a university is the place where dreams can be fulfilled. The subjects such as how to deal with life, how to interact with people and how to become independent are taught and experienced there. A college or a university makes an individual complete and help him/her to lead a successful life.
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- TPO-27 - Integrated Writing Task The little ice age was a period of unusually cold temperature in many parts of the world that lasted from about the year 1350 until 1900CE. There were unusually harsh winters, and glaciers grew larger in many areas. Scient 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...fit a person greatly since it augments a persons knowledge, aids in developing a career ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...s. He had learned that at high school a little bit, but in college he studied it in depth....
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244215938303 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.167095115681 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0874035989717 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0231362467866 0.046263068375 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0565552699229 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115681233933 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0385604113111 0.0351676179071 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88183469961 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334190231362 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102827763496 0.0887237588012 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0154241645244 0.0209618222197 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0205655526992 0.0139019557991 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2099.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 355.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91267605634 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394366197183 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295774647887 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211267605634 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135211267606 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88183469961 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 52.4263034884 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1363636364 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2867634991 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4090909091 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.7138284251 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.61458333333 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192353195802 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127574991636 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0839889868758 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452788741315 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117436822619 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626256705055 0.114077575197 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710454272227 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.203407883644 0.336927656856 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0308902183653 0.067059652881 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121504928847 0.210909579961 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737450116148 0.0618886996521 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.